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Lyrical Note…

DO NOT USE POP SONG LYRICS IN YOUR BOOK.

It’s the one piece of advice I consistently give other writers and the one piece of advice that is most consistently ignored. Yet if they were to listen to just one thing I tell them, this would be it:

DO NOT USE POP SONG LYRICS IN YOUR BOOK.

It is expensive — often prohibitively so — and it’s often unnecessary if you stretch yourself. I rewrote a lot of song lyrics out of my first book, Mahogany Slade. At the time, I didn’t see how it would be possible and the, once complete, I was glad I’d removed the lyrics, as they had become anchors on the story. Instead, I found other means of conveying how important music was to the characters.

Blake Morrison wrote a great “learn by example” piece about this in The Guardian.

Now did I forget anything? Oh right…

DO NOT USE POP SONG LYRICS IN YOUR BOOK.

 
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Posted by on November 6, 2013 in Pop Life

 

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Kelly Clarkson, Coffee Ambassador…

My favorite part of this Green Mountain coffee commercial: “Ambassador” Kelly Clarkson manages three Spanish phrases (“buenos dias,” “salud,” and “cinco”) yet asks the Peruvian coffee bean picker a full English sentence and apparently expects him to understand. And he probably does, which is the ultimate indictment of our education system.

 
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Posted by on November 5, 2013 in Pop Life, Social Commentary

 

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Batman meets Sweet Charity…

Adam West, Burt Ward and Gwen Verdon on the Merv Griffin Show in September of 1966. West, as ever, is just perfectly cool.

 
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Posted by on November 3, 2013 in Pop Life

 

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